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25/03/11 We will edit this together next week. To do this you will need to delete the photo of the work and copy and paste it from pages instead.

Thursday 7 April Medical problems in Christchurch

The 2011 earthquake has been a big wake up call for all of the people of Christchurch because they thought it was all over. I think you were not ready for this earthquake. some people are not being helped. Why not? You have to help them through all this pain they are having because their loved ones have died.

Ambulances are coming and going from hospitals and camps but there are not enough to go around, so people are using there vans you should get ambulances because they have all the medical equipment inside them and they would be so much easer to work on people instead of having to rush around with a person in the boot of your van.

Medical supplies are the best thing to have in an earthquake but you don`t have enough, if you do not have enough then order some. Who cares if they costs lots of money buy them with the money your getting from the rest of New Zealand we do not really care as long as we are helping the people of Christchurch and Canterbury then you do not have to worry about so much and then you are helping.

Hospitals do not have enough room for the people of Christchurch and Canterbury so your using tents. Good for you but tents won’t have power so some medical equipment won’t work so I think you should use a building thats not been a victim of the earthquake and has power then help them in the building it would be much roomer than a tent and much warmer with a heater. you can put lots mattresses in a building and not so much in a tent.

I hope I have changed your mind and you will want to do some of this stuff like getting more ambulances from the rest of New Zealand buying lots more medical supplies with the money you are getting and helping people in buildings that have power and get people ready for what mite happen in the future.

by olivia munro