T2+Narratives

__Thursday 7 July__ Narrative “Time for breakfast Sally” Yelled mum from down stairs. “Ok” I yell. I got changed in to my ugly uniform I hate wearing the same as other people. Walking out of my room I grab my bag and skip down stairs. I sit down and eat my breakfast. The fire was on so it was warm. I sat on the couch and watched T.V for a while, while I was waiting for the bus. “The bus is here” Said mum. “I’ll see you after school mum” I run out the door across the path and hop in the bus. The journey to school is 20 minutes long the longest 20 minutes of the day and the worst 20 minutes of the day. I got to school and hopped off the bus I walked to my class and opened the door my room number is 29 I walked to my desk and unpacked my bag “another day” I thought to myself. I walked to my to tray and got out my books and stationary. “Sit at your desks and listen” Says my teacher “we have a new student in the class her name is Stella” I turned around just looking at her I knew she was trouble. She had glasses and a big smile. My best friend Oscar thought she was trouble to. I was talking to Oscar at morning tea and Stella butted in saying what a lovely school this is we just nodded our heads thinking she was mad saying this was a lovely school because it wasn't. The next day at school Stella wasn’t there “thank goodness for that” said Oscar “she was a nutcase”. That day things went slow we thought it was never going to end. It was very busy after school I couldn’t find Oscar so I went to the bus stop and waited. 10 minutes later I saw is bright ginger hair. What a day I said to Oscar “I know what you mean” he said. On the way home we got a ice cream at the new dairy it’s so flash I said to Oscar “well for a dairy”. When we went to pay we saw Stella we asked her why she wasn’t at school. She said because her mum was sick and her dad was at work so she had look after her. She turned around and her dark black hair ran down her back. She walked off with a bag full of lollies ice cream and popcorn. “Thats a lot of stuff” I said to Oscar. Oscar and I walked to my house and ate our ice creams and watched T.V “there’s something weird about that stella girl” I said “hey did you hear about her birthday party next weekend!” said Oscar “and everyone in the class is invited, she’s giving everyone invites on Monday”. “That’s probably why she had so many lollies” I said. “Oscar what about you stay the night on the blowup mattress and we can ask mum to have a picnic in the forest” Oscar agreed. Oscar and I walked to the kitchen to see if my mum was there “mum can Oscar stay the night tonight”. “As long as it is ok with his mum” yus! I thought Oscars mum never says no “Mrs Arran can I phone my mum and see if I can stay” “Heres the phone” said my mum.Oscar took a while on the phone when he finished he said “Sally I can stay”. “Yus!” I said. Oscar and I played on the playstation for a while then we did some homework. “Time for bed” said mum. We walked up stairs to my room and Oscar slept on the big blowup mattress. We went to sleep straight away but Oscar went to sleep first. In the night I woke up with a start Oscar was tapping me and saying there was a man standing at the door and he knew it was’t my dad because he was in England for business. In the morning we got up and went down stairs. For breakfast we had pancakes with wiped cream and chocolate sauce my favourite. After the yummy breakfast we got changed and went down stairs. we played playstation for 1 hour. After that I brushed my brown wavy hair Oscar and I where both wearing shorts and T-shirts ready for the day in the forest. Mum packed the basket fill with lots of yummy food and lollies. We walked out side and hoped in the car the trip to the forest was about an hour and a bit but it was fun. when we got there we jumped out the car and ran to the nearest bench “mum said we’re not eating till 12” “well we can go a walk in the forest” said Oscar “Ok” I answered. We ran to the nearest track and started walking. We kept walking un till we found a giant tree was in our way “it must of fallen in the night” I said, “well have to walk back” said Oscar “no” I said back “I’m going over”. I started climbing the fallen tree it was slippery “I made it Oscar you try now”. Oscar walked to the tree and started to climb “it’s slippery” “I know” I grabbed his arm and pulled “I made it” he said.We walked for 15 minuets longer then we came to a little cottage their was a man outside he was clean shaven wrinkly and had deep blue eyes they were as blue as the sky. As we got closer he said “how ya going are you hungry” “yes” I answered “why don’t you come in I have to tell you something” “Ok” “what are you doing for all we know he..” “shut up” I said. We walked inside the cottage it was dark inside the walls were black and the windows were boarded up. “Ok” said the man “what are your names” “mines sally and this is Oscar” “perfect” said the man “what yours” said Oscar in a funny tone “mine, Mr Smith”. “So what did you want us for, I know it wasn’t for lunch” I said “you guested correctly” said Mr Smith “I was wanting to talk to you about that new girl in your class” “how did you know we had a new girl in our class” “I knew because her parents are wanted on pluto, she’s plutonian not human” “I knew there was something fishy about her” I said. “Her birthday party next week is for her parents there hungry so there going to eat everyone in your class” “eww” said Oscar. “Come out the back and I’ll show you something” said Mr Smith We walked out the back and our eyes were blurry from being inside so long. We walked past some funny looking gnomes and big tall trees we got to a cauldron filled with a mysterious potion it had lumps and worms and was a funny colour “oh yuck I hope thats not for us” said Oscar “well sorry it is for you” said Mr Smith I thought I was going to be sick. “You have to drink it” said Mr Smith “ok” I said “it doesn’t look that bad” he handed us a cup filled with the horrible potion “I’ll drink it first” I said to Oscar. I started to drink the potion I could worms wriggling down my throat, when I had finished I felt a sudden urge of power “your turn now” I said to Oscar “what dose it taste like?” he said back “quite nice actually” I answered he started to drink the fowl smelling potion he looked as green as grass, when he was finished he looked as though he was going to be sick. “Right you two you now have super powers” said Mr Smith we both looked at him blankly “Sally your powers are reading peoples minds and super strength” “and you Oscar turning invisible and super strength” “thanks” I said “will we see you again and how do we conquer these things?” “yes to the first and don’t know for the second” “see you next time” said Oscar. walking out his back garden we past the funny looking gnomes and big tall trees. We walked through the gate to another path that lead us back to the car it took us about 15 minutes to get back but when we got back mum was asleep in the car. We knocked on the door for mum to let us in she woke up with a start she gave us a bit of a wave and unlocked the car we jumped in the basket sill filled with goody’s. When we got back Oscar packed his bags and we dropped him home. The rest of the day was very boring I just watched T.V and played playstation. That night in bed I thought about the day I had had what a weird day. I the morning was my usual routine. When I was at school I unpacked my bag and sat at my desk. Stella was handing out her invites to her party she gave a invite to me I gave her a sly smile then she walked away to Oscar and gave him an invite then she walked away blushing like a tomato. the rest of the day went fast so fast I forgot what I was doing. At the end of school I got the bus home the bus smelt like old people and the chairs were tatty. When I got home I done my homework and gave my powers a try, first tried my mind reading power I walked to mum and asked her whats for dinner “it’s a surprise” she said it was hard to read her mind but I thought and thought and “got it!” I yelled out “what”said mum in surprise “where having spaghetti” I said “how did you know that” said mum confused I walked not answering. Next I tried super strength I walked to then table witch I think is heaver than a elephant I tried lifting it with my pinky my face was scrunched up like a dried prune I couldn’t lift it up I tried with my hands I still couldn’t lift it. I phoned Oscar to see if his powers worked he said his invisibility worked but his super strength didn’t we planed that we would sneak out our houses and walk to the forest and find Mr Smith. That night I went to bed fully dressed I did not get any sleep. After my mum went to bed I got up and walked out side I was as quite as a mouse. I walked to Oscars house and waited for him it took him ten minutes before he got out of bed he tiptoed down the stairs and walked out the door. We set of on our journey to the forest it took us about 3 hours to get there but we still had about 30 minutes to walk, we got to the tree our torches were getting low in power they were very dim “we better get there soon or i’m turning around” said Oscar I climbed up the tree it was slipperier than the other day we finely got over, we walk

Reflection: today I enjoyed doing my narrative because it is fun

__Monday 27 June__ Narrative “Time for breakfast Sally” Yelled mum from down stairs. “Ok” I yell. Walking out of my room I grab my bag and skip down stairs. I sit down and eat my breakfast. “The bus is here” Says mum. “I’ll see you after school mum” I run out the door across the path and hop in the bus. The journey to school is 20 minutes long the longest 20 minutes of the day and the worst 20 minutes of the day.

I got to school and hopped off the bus I walked to class and opened the door I walked to my desk and unpacked my bag “another day” I thought to myself. “Sit at your desks and listen” Says my teacher “we have a new student in the class her name is Stella” I turned around just looking at her I knew she was trouble. My best friend Oscar thought so to. I was talking to Oscar at morning tea and Stella butted in saying what a lovely school this is we just nodded our heads thinking she was mad saying this was a lovely school because it wasn't.

The next day at school Stella wasn’t there “thank goodness for that” said Oscar “she was a nutcase”. That day things went slow we thought it was never going to end. What a day I said to Oscar “I know what you mean” he said. On the way home we got a ice cream at the new dairy it’s so flash I said to Oscar “well for a dairy”. When we went to pay we saw Stella we asked her why she wasn’t at school. She said because her mum was sick and her dad was at work so she had look after her.

Oscar and I walked to my house and ate our ice creams “there is something weird about her” I said “hey did you hear about her birthday party next weekend” said Oscar “and everyone in the class is invited, she’s giving everyone invites on Monday”. Everyone in the class I thought she must be mad or she’s got a big house. “Hey Oscar what about you stay the night and we can ask mum to have a picnic in the forest”. Oscar and I walked down stairs “mum can Oscar stay the night tonight”. “As long as it is ok with his mum” yus! I thought Oscars mum never says no “mrs Arran can I phone my mum and see if I can stay” “Heres the phone” said my mum. “Sally I can stay” said Oscar. “yus!” I said. “Time for bed” said mum. We walked up stairs and Oscar slept on the blowup mattress. We went to sleep straight away but Oscar went to sleep first.

In the morning we got up and went down stairs. For breakfast we had pancakes. After the yummy breakfast we got changed and went down stairs. we played playstation for 1 hour

__**My Learning Targets!**__

**My next step is: Describe the characters and the setting. This will allow the reader to have a real picture of your story in their head! e.g characters- personalities,what they look like, sound like etc setting - where they are, looks like, sounds like, feels like etc. Basic grammar and punctuation - ?, !, capitals**

**I will achieve this by: Read what I write and correct any mistakes I see. Imagine your own story and put this on paper. Share with a friend and get feedback.**

**Date achieved/signed: Miss Stovold**

h __Tuesday 14 June__

Personification and alliteration

LI:We are learning to use Personification and alliteration in our writing

__**Personification:**__

Giving a non living thing human characteristics

The wind whispered in my ear

The clouds burst into tears

The waves hit me in the back

The soccer ball jumped over the net

Thursday 9th June

This is our prior knowledge of metaphors displayed as a wordle document Mediphors are comparisons of two unlike things with out using AS and LIKE He was faster than a cheater She read a book ever 20 seconds

Topic: Identifying Similes Directions: Complete the simile by filling in the blank. 1. The car was as dirty as a. Pig 2. The candy was like popcorn in my mouth __.__ __3. His hands were as big as____. horse __ __4. My little brother sounds like a tortured cat __ __5. My room is as messy as__ __pig sty__ __6. School is like__. heaven 7. The chair was as hard as a horses back __8. Her hair looked like__ a silky blanket 9. The monster’s breath was like a rubbish dump 10. The water was as cold as. snow in winter 11. My lunch tasted like nice stuff 12. The rabbit was as soft as a puppie

Metaphors Metaphors are imaginative ways to describe something by comparing that thing to something else. For example, if I wanted to say that Dan is tall, I could say that Dan is a giant.

Use a metaphor to describe somebody who is:

tall kind fast snails are slow My friends are smart Homor simson is fat sneaky I was very angry I saw a beautiful girl She was very ugly she was very stubborn Lots of people are short she was very thin is very silly moths are scared easily He is a giant. She is an angle

Similes Two things that are not alike